…this guy’s a textbook example. Passages like:
While Alterations By Sofia is a tailor in Los Angeles who definitely gets a lot more female clientele than men, she does accept tailoring jobs from male clients as well, me included. Ever since this tailor in Los Angeles was able to make me a suit that I actually liked, I was hooked. Now, I don’t go to other tailors. When I have tailoring needs, I go to them because I know they will make a suit in the exact specifications that I need.
…show how little he understands about how important the human element is when it comes to search and on-site copy. When composing for the web, keep keywords in mind, but this sort of density does nothing but turn off your potential customers.
#1 by Bronson Tang on August 15, 2008 - 7:31 am
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Great stuff… a friend of a friend..Dean Hunt also has an article about writing and getting posted in major newspapers… I was hoping to use for my blog to get more views. It seems writing is taking on another form with the whole business casual writing…thanks, appreciate the info…